The last thing I write

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 20th_centry_fox, Feb 9, 2007.

  1. 20th_centry_fox

    20th_centry_fox Member

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    Been so long now, and the

    colors are part of my

    eyes

    prisms for the bluest part

    black dot horizon line

    pupils are mine

    and

    im seeing colors true for spring

    like flower feathers, silk in this

    calling life devine

    with out words.

    I've been here

    purple heart, mine disapears

    I've been here

    closing in...the sky

    overwhelms me with you

    saying goodbye.

    a heartache for a star.

    and its so long

    since I've been

    why are there no right words for spring

    like flower feathers blossoming

    silk rays; all lightening whispering

    and freedom won't be

    calling life one thing

    theres just eyes being sight

    words not deep enough to be

    the feeling.

    and the closest meaning,

    Of life....

    AS now im taking off..

    is an airplane horizon,

    riding the skyline

    showing me height.

    its like oceans depth..

    content with just sound night
     
  2. thegreatbuddah420

    thegreatbuddah420 Member

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    i like it pretty powerful
     
  3. esoteric

    esoteric Member

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    Sensational poem.

    ...and at 13!
     
  4. 20th_centry_fox

    20th_centry_fox Member

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    thank you alot
     
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