this is a poem I wrote called gather the Roses its Kinda sad let me know....

as Im lyin on my tomb
stiff and shakin and blue
gather the roses and stoke the fire
burn them to ashes and save the thorns
make me a noose and then a crown
make my deathbed and burn it down
place me in a steel bottle and spread me around
life in refection burnt to the ground
Gather the Roses
ashes to ashes everytime around

 

Great poem!!

 

You are right about it being sad, but it is also wonderfuly written!

 

It flows well IMO. Pretty haunting I think.

 

That poem sucked. You let me down.

 

That is a very good poem....

 

very well written .good job

 

Odd, I didn't see this as sad. Maybe I'm more warped than I thought.
Final, but not sad. Good job though.

 

love it......