Lately I've been acidized Seeing the world through acid eyes Feeling like a beatnik in disguise This lysergic bliss has got me going With every one of my problems showing And all my emotions quickly flowing Mysterious voices are calling me Telling me to set them free I wonder if I'm alive or dead And if this is all real or inside my head ---Ty. G.---
i can really relate to this. the rhyming definitly works in this poem... and rhyming is a hard thing to get right. good work
