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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Spaceboy13, Jan 1, 2007.

  1. Spaceboy13

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    Faces of Moksha





    Sonic gates of rapture swaying purple and blue

    Do you believe in rapture they asked?

    I raced to hearts of psychic energy without being harmed

    I saw the faces of moksha dieing in the arms of creation

    Enlightenment being torn to shreds by violent manifestos

    Incarnations of Buddha smile upon the shrouded destinies of the despaired

    They looked to the stranger for guided conceptions of parallel thoughts and hallucinations

    As he looked upon them, he morphed into the angry Moloch who shouted barbaric obscenities and bled on the untamed women who bore their bodies for one moment of fame

    31,619,921 mutilated corpses lay on the frozen tundra

    The infectious bystanders who ate the flesh and cracked the bones were retrieved for a second coming of genocides

    Exhausted, fatigued beings sat and perched on the street lights howling at the monumental moon

    Enlightened beings who inhaled the gusting smoke of marijuana found the day a little more acceptable

    Bearded men hoping on hot coals curled their tongues around a thorn less rose and bled red blood and tasted hot sugar

    A blurred image of scarlet figures who reached a hand out to guide you to the world of demons and Caym

    Who neared to far to the bottom of the ocean and whose head blew up from the bends

    As auditory mischief’s yelled out to summon Abaddon whose fierce light rained down locusts and tortured apparitions

    As thru all this chaos and commotions Shiva gifted the dying, the sick, the insane with fields of marijuana to cope with the understanding of death and hatred

    Monks whose protests revitalized the new coming monarch to let the spirits run wild like orthodox flowers in mystical meadows of bliss and mysticism

    Hindu gurus who shouted truths from the Rig Veda and died according to the Naradeya Purana

    The trickster Krishna who fooled the creator to rein down flowers and paintings for a last conquest of peace and admiration

    Philosophies whose answers were nothing but ambiguous mysticism and shoveled shit

    Mysterious identities who laughed thru the fire at the incarnations of jesus

    Villagers gathering in a circle to view the extrodinary karma bending ways of Rishabha

    My cold, beautiful abode of pouring sunlight on the peaks of Mount Kailash, attaining peace of mind, soul, body, and heart

    Looking throught the hour glass hoping for a new wave of stars and moon to appear

    Lotus flowers blooming in the bright forest, passing a monk under a Bodhi chanting the mantra of many bodhisattvas

    Ksitigarbha the extinguisher of hells, Manjusri slcing thru ignornace with his flaming sword, Avalokitesvara reaching out to me with one of his 1,000 arms, Vajrapani protecting us throughout this hellish journey

    What visions of paradise I have tonight, the extinction of greed, desire, and craves

    The white lit bliss of Nirvana and Buddhahood creeping into my mind and body

    Oh the way it swayed me

    Oh the way it moved me

    Oh the way it saved me

    Ascending to places unknown by humans I fight thru the ignorance greeting the soothing sounds of chants and drums







    im not finished yet, i want to make it at least 3 pages long, so far its a little over a page, if you commented thank you very very much, i really appreciate it, ill try to comment yours as well
     
  2. JaneJimMorrisonFan

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    i liked it - wots it about?
     
  3. Spaceboy13

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    religion
     
  4. Flyinglilypad

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    I don't know much about eastern religions, but its a good poem.

    EDIT: w00t! 69th post!
     

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