Written for those separated from thier lovers

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by athena_skye, Dec 15, 2006.

  1. athena_skye

    athena_skye Member

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    "What the World Takes For Granted"

    Keep me in your arms
    just one more moment

    Please, let's not move
    nor let the world
    try and move us

    For the world is so nieve
    they take love so lightly
    and for them
    it comes and goes

    But I could forever imagine
    the way you would hold me
    if we were together
    the way your skin would feel with mine

    The way my heart would feel full
    knowing I'd wake up beside you
    Knowing I could kiss you
    whenever I want

    The way you'd catch my tears
    and kiss them all away
    I want what the world takes for granted!

    To see the way your hand fits in mine
    to show you I love you more everyday
    ...you make everything beautiful.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you for your graceful heartfelt expressions,
    your sharing resonates with simple kindness and sacred love.
     
  3. moonlightdancer

    moonlightdancer Member

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    Hi,
    Your words are so inspiring to me. I am separated from my love over the holiday season. I miss him so much. Your poem warmed my heart.
    Thanks to you.
    mdancer
     
  4. moonlightdancer

    moonlightdancer Member

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    Hi,
    I am separated from my honey during the holiday season. Your poem warmed my heart and spoke the words that I could not come up with.
    Thanks to you,
    mdancer
     
  5. trekker

    trekker Intrepid Traveler

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    We will be together soon huney moonlight. I hate seperations, but the heart grows stronger as a result, that I am sure of. I will want to be with you more when we are together again. That was a touching poem Athena. It was so simple yet with grace like Sylvan said. There are so many talented people on this forum and I am grateful to be a part of this community. Thank you.
     
  6. athena_skye

    athena_skye Member

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    Again, thanks you guys, for your replies :)
     
  7. las puertas

    las puertas Member

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    i love your poem it really speaks to you
     
  8. moonlightdancer

    moonlightdancer Member

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    Hey there,
    Sweetheart, is it possible for my heart and soul to grow any stronger feelings for you than I already have? Yeah to all of those who have found partners on the forums. We idealistic, somewhat crazy, soul-searching folks on the forums deserve one another.
    mdancer
     
  9. trekker

    trekker Intrepid Traveler

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    Agried. Couldn't be more true.
     

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