Personalised Psalm

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Dec 1, 2006.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    Where can i run to, to hide from your prescence?
    I go to the hills and you are there!
    I hide in the thick thickets of grassy fields,
    amongst the puffy stems of natures splays.

    Every waterhorse fly, passing by in the wind,
    every hour in the Sun,
    It melts my unhealth.
    Where in the world can i hide?
    Where can i run to?
    Where is my escape?
    As i collapse into shadows caressing my wounds
    there you are, peacefully serene
    and i can only cry in your arms
    as you embrace my sorry self.
     
  2. Flux

    Flux Member

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    I gotta say i like it, especially how it flows. Especially the lines
    "Every waterhorse fly, passing by in the wind,
    every hour in the Sun

    melts my unhealth"

    Relaxing. Thanks
     
  3. hippypoet33

    hippypoet33 Member

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    Yes! I think I've had this experience. Nice work.
     

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