Yes!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PapaChulo, Nov 28, 2006.

  1. PapaChulo

    PapaChulo Member

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    The sign it beckons
    To you to try
    Makes no sense
    You wonder why
    Standing alone
    One day at a time
    Working so hard
    For nickels and dimes
    Time your enemy
    Yet your greatest friend
    Flows without reason
    World without end
    Making no sense
    Or so it appears
    You call out for help
    Think no one hears
    Yet part of a plan
    This road you walk
    Time to listen
    Time to talk
    Just an illusion
    Inside your head
    Do you even hear
    The words that are said
    Going round in circles
    There is no need
    Slave to your actions
    When you could be freed
    Listen to your voice
    The sound it makes
    Watch the ripples of water
    Glide through the lake
    And know yourself
    The part you play
    Understand the meaning
    Of the words you say
    Notice shadows on the wall
    The patterns they make
    Knowing that nature
    Makes no mistakes
    Here on earth
    With a story to tell
    No need to panic
    All is well
    Less is more
    More is less
    There are no no's
    The answer is yes

    -Samantha Brickell
     
  2. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    This is more beautiful than peanut butter sandwiches.

    Half way thru I realized I was bopping my head -- now that's a good poem. Thanks mucho for sharing.
     
  3. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    Yea, and peanut butter rocks. :D Sweet stuff, man. Loved it. :)
     
  4. stratface

    stratface Member

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    pretty sweet. it is a good head-bobber.
     
  5. Flux

    Flux Member

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    You ROCK. Thanks.
     
  6. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    every time i come to this poem i keep thinking i've already commented, but i haven't

    it confuses me such!

    anyhoo, i thing ganja goo hits the nail on the head

    excellent my mang :)
     
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