poem from last year

Babble

Speaking with an intangible tongue
One might feel that weight cannot be
Measured
Not by a scale or reason
But on a level
A plane
That to many humble folks
Is ethereal
That touching into an untapped
Realm could cause unlikely
Things to form and transform
To transcend
Knowledge
And itself knowing that if such
A beast of such a proportion
A flower of such a ratio
As this world revolves
To speak with an intangible tongue
Is expected


-rdw 12/5/05

 

Beautiful, as always. Love it.

 

i dislike freeverse.

 

as always, thank you

i'm sorry

 

:flowers: Amazing. I love reading something that feels like I wrote it myself.

Is that selfish?

 

can't say i've ever gotten that comment before

but...thanks

 

I like this a lot.

 

I also really like the poem under your pic. You write that too?

 

nope, that's from a led zeppelin song

hence robert plant


thank you btw

 

i love free verse
and i like this very much

 

well thank you thank you

 

Next year, I will still be digging this poem.

 

awesome

i wish i could find the notebook that this poem is contained in

it's in one of those awesome canary yellow writing pads, but with the spirally wired thing

 

I'd love to see some more of what was written around the same time as this one.

 

me too

this was when i started this whole "aesthetics over comprehension" sort of phase

but alas...i cannot find it, it must be back at my mom's house

 

it'll probably be more fun to find it in a couple of years anyway.

 

not when i wanna find it now


:tongue:

 

Hahahaha, if you do find it, let us in on the goods.

 

right on, teh...

your free verse flows!!!!!

*sigh*