Gothic tears.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by J0hn, Nov 24, 2006.

  1. J0hn

    J0hn Phantom

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    A girl sitting alone dressed in black clothing every day and every night. She doesn't sleep, she sits by gravestones, head in hands, appears silent but she weaps. A strong wind comes and the young girl can see her fate is sealed. The doom has come. What will she do now in suburbia? running from the law, running from her mum.

    Drinking alchohol till she can drink no more. Cutting herself till she collapses to the floor. A fragrance of grit and dirt infiltrates her nose and as the lights of cars flickers by on the Bromley road, she stays here in her own abode. Camping in a graveyard next to a small grove.

    At one am, the girl gets up from the floor and walks along the surbuban streets of Lewisham. Filled with emotion, turbulence and tribulation. Walking, feeling colder than when she first set foot outside tonight. Clinging to her jacket with all her might. Suddenly a police car pulls up and the policeman asks the girl whether she is okey. The girl just stares at the policeman until she reveals. Slashes running all the way down to her wrist, the blood as red as ruby and the streaks of blood running around the other side of her arm and staining her clothing that once concealed.

    The policeman tells her to get in the car. The girl complies like an obedient child. The policeman suddenly gets a radio transmission and begins telling the person on the other end what had just happened. "Yeh, I have just picked up this young girl. she is a total mess, I am on my way to Lewisham Hospital. It seems like she has nothing anymore, it is like she feels that she don't belong in this world." The girl mutters something under her breath. The policeman asks her to speak up as he cannot hear her. The girl then nods her head and reveals that her mother don't care for her anymore.

    A tear forms under her eyes, trickles down her pale looking cheeks and then wipes her eyes with her blood stained clothing.
    As the policeman reaches his hand out to comfort her, the girl suddenly rips his hand off and the policeman screams out in agony. "Shit shit, god help me". The girl then devours the cop and only the clothes remain on the side of the road as she chucks them out the window as she hi jacks the car. The girl dissappears into thin air and the next day, the words are engraved on every tombstone. The words that suggest Satan isn't far.

     
  2. steel_bubbles

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    woa--thats deep man. wasn't expecting the ending, but it's pretty good. good shit, good shit
     

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