meandering

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tipdrinker, Aug 21, 2004.

  1. tipdrinker

    tipdrinker Member

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    Fair And Balanced



    One inch pixels plummet

    From towering buildings of terrible twisting melting metal.

    Millimetre minds sink through the sky and mash the ground.

    The black dot bodies rendered and rubbled.

    Silent Mysterious suspen-dead darts of dark.



    Captured on lens spark there journey is frozen.

    Filmed, photod, in flailing, flying, flattening.

    Sam-Witched between talk and text they

    Melt into sensational hysterical mayhem and controversy.



    Each One a Name. Neutered into nut-Shells.

    Bombed into Crush and Snare speeches,

    Statistics and nocare. Their sacred bodies

    As shields for shameful oil black massacres.



    They all left needlessly. All. From sky to sand.

    Their souls parted their twisted bodies.

    Immaculate vapour. Soundless innocents

    Leave, released from the land of the free.











    Kevin Carroll.

    Rory



    Roaring rhythmic ramblings rupture riding waves.

    The steel strings strum, vibrating our souls.

    Your essence and magnificence magnified.

    Carve your soundscapes, chip the axe-paint.

    Scale your heights and crash those chords.

    You hammer-on and pull-off your harmonic slides

    Momentarily muting our misery you mesmerise.



    You crash through time

    Burn through footage grain

    Analogue gain, crackle and hiss.

    The Celtic roar of the axe-wielding warrior

    Battling in Berlin, blowing away Belfast.



    The sweat trickles through your trancing hair.

    Steam rises from your silhouette

    Hands grab those hero’s hands.

    In humble gratitude you depart

    To burn out bright and fast.



    The needle scratches out turnstyle tears

    Never old, never lost to our ears.

    Resonating, responding despite the years.











    Kevin Carroll.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Such precise, almost mathematical language...spellbounding because of its robotic nature. Intriguing piece. Though the last stanza was not particularly favorite, the first definitely buzzed with images.
    For me this had an echo of something political...
     
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