A Wise Man Sits

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Nov 10, 2006.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    The wise man sits still.
    He listens to the cries of the water fowl
    in the distance while he sips his herbal tea
    and eats his rice noodle soup.

    The wise man sits still.
    The crickets chirp in chorus together,
    and the misquitos buzz around his head.
    The wise man lives in harmony with them.

    The wise man sits still.
    The hawk lets out a cry of victory and
    scoops up a rodent outside his hut.
    The man watches this cycle of life and death.
    The wise man sits still.

    Peace and love
     
  2. soaringeagle

    soaringeagle Senior Member

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    sweety i love this 1 alot..i love all of yours but this 1 especialy
    :)
     
  3. ommanipadmehum

    ommanipadmehum Member

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    such a nice poem...enjoyed it

    take care,
    -marina
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    To dream is to sit
    to watch,
    to wait
    to smell,
    to taste,
    to see,
    to hear.

    I dream of an image
    of peace and harmony.
    There are blossoming violet, red, and yellow flowers
    surrounding by bright yellow monarch butterflies.
    The wind whistled her sweet song of peace
    as my white skirt billowed.
    I could almost taste the honey
    the busy bees were going to make,
    while they gathered the sweet nectar,
    ignoring me standing amongst them.
    The smell of butterfly bush overwhelmed the air.
    My dream is a paradise which I will reach one day.

    Thanks for the inspiration teh-horace! Sorry this is so long, but I'm a little wordy today.

    Peace and love
     
  5. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Seasons change everyday.
    No matter how much we want
    them to remain the same.
    Summer comes and then it goes,
    fall approaches and leaves fall off,
    and winter quickly arrives with snow white,
    when that is gone, spring develops with
    blossoms and bees anew.
    Summer soon is here again.

    Peace and love
     
  6. MollyThe Hippy

    MollyThe Hippy get high school

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    your poem of the wise man expresses an underlying spiritual philosophy ... we are all watching... some are just too busy to notice
     
  7. hippypoet33

    hippypoet33 Member

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    Let us all sit a while!!

    Nice poem.
     
  8. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    He watches, but does he participate?

    Good poem, though.
     

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