the silent treatment

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ommanipadmehum, Nov 6, 2006.

  1. ommanipadmehum

    ommanipadmehum Member

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    i hate when
    i give you the silent treatment

    but have can i
    ignore all those things you said about him,
    and there are things you left unsaid,
    but the look in your eyes says it all,
    you wanna judge me all the way

    and why do you feel
    you can judge me,
    are you my god,
    a deity,
    a saint?

    (we both know you aren't)

    can't you see i'm only human
    and maybe i'm aware of my actions,
    mistakes you call them
    maybe i want to deal with them all by myself,
    maybe i need you to be there for me

    (after all you are my family)

    in his arms i feel safe,
    his closeness brings warmth to my heart,
    his kisses remind me how great lover i can be,
    his presence makes me forget
    how lonely i actually am

    don't take that away from me,
    let him stay for awhile,
    let me be happy for another hour,
    he'll be gone tomorrow
    let me enjoy this illusion
    for i'm fully aware of the consequences

    (please,don't ask for explanations)

    now i hate when
    i give you the silent treatment

    but maybe
    silence is good,
    maybe silence will tell you…
    maybe you'll see...
    i'm bleeding on the inside
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Another great poem! It too is sad. Are you going through a rough time? If so, I hope things get better for you. I really enjoy reading your poetry.

    Peace and love
     
  3. ommanipadmehum

    ommanipadmehum Member

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    you are most kind,again...i wrote this few weeks ago after something that happened and this is the way i reacted,words i left unsaid,the way i felt about the situation...was very sad and dissappointed on so many levels...thank you,hippie one.i highly appreciate your comments...

    take care,
    -marina
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Anytime, om! I'ld like to read more poetry when you're ready!

    Peace and love
     

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