she never wanted them to feel her pain, all she wanted was them to see it she never forced them to listen, and yet she was dying to be heard she never explained them about the way she felt inside, and yet she was mistakenly sure they could tell she never told them how much she loved them, and yet she was hoping they could read the signs she never showed them her true talents and so she deeply,silently suffered she never asked them to be there for her, and yet she was craving for their love
This is a sad poem. I feel sorry for the main character. Poor girl. I can kind of relate to her in some ways. Very well written. I love this poem! Peace and love
hey there hippie one! thank you for reading me and for spending some time on replying...yeah this is sad i guess...there are times when i feel alone and abandoned and writing about it kinda helps me to release that pain and i guess i become stronger or i simply become aware of it...i don't know...thank you once again take care, -marina
Hey! Poetry is a great outlet for our feelings. I can really tell what mood I'm in by my poetry. Maybe you can tell how you are feeling too. I have a hard time expressing my feelings with words so I write. Do you find the same thing too? Peace and love
