Two on living

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Nov 10, 2006.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Wolf

    Imagine how dedicated to life
    he must be,
    to live it that way.
    How absorbed in it,
    how at home in it
    would you have to be,
    how hungry for it,
    to do it like he does?

    To throw your face against the pulsing neck of life;
    to, with your own teeth,
    the hot blood filling your mouth
    the hair catching in your throat
    the body trembling, jerking against your jaws,

    kill, not in anger but in earnest,
    and take what you need raw,
    with nothing between you and it,
    feeling firsthand, like no steel or fire can,
    that you exactly the same,
    save for a difference of intention.

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    Going For It

    You think the tree worries about getting dirty
    when it makes ready to set down roots?
    Look how it pushes them down,
    so in love with the dirt and the mud,
    the terrible black depths below--
    it just about throws them down, fiercely,
    going hard for it,
    as if wanting the very center of the earth.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Two good poems. I like the raw emotions conotated in the first one. I like them!

    Peace and love
     
  3. Forrestspirit

    Forrestspirit Member

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  4. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    on living indeed

    very awesome, especially the first :D
     
  5. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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