This is a poem about a dark time in my life when i was extremely depressed, suicidal, and i need to write about it, this is the first draft, just give me some constructive criticism. The Devils In My Mind The devil that dwells in the pain of self-doubt Has cast a shadow across my soul Engulfing the labyrinth of my mind And smothering the crimson beat of my heart This parasite dwells in the most hurtful of places In the mocking cheers of supposed friends And lurks in the back of my mind chipping away at my sense of reality Life has become one big dream, a nightmare in fact One that is unescapeable Nights are dark and long and daylight drifts by without a whisper The lights are fading, there's not an end in sight Scared I lie alone, unable to escape this reality Days and nights wander past, shadows are more prominent But slowly this lonliness passes, light is apearing at the end of the tunnel The end is in sight, the devils have moved on
