The Cloak of Death

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lanaia74, Oct 26, 2006.

  1. lanaia74

    lanaia74 Member

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    I want nothing to do with this evil thing
    But it is a part of life
    His cloak he holds near so he won't feel the sting
    He is about to give, sharp as a knife.

    His cloak is his disguise
    So he can't feel the emotions he rips apart
    He is always there for you when you die
    Picking up the pieces to add to his deathly cart.

    He really seems happy in his awful work
    Using his cloak to hide
    Watch out! He always lurks
    Waiting to tear down someone's pride.

    The grim reaper as we know him
    Making each of us miserable at times
    He don't care if he goes out on a limb
    He has no feelings, this awful thing hits us on a whim.

    The cloak of death such a cruel thing
    But what can we do?
    There is a time in life, his awful song we shall all sing
    And his cloak he holds near never having any fears.
     
  2. athena_skye

    athena_skye Member

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    I would say 8 out of 10. Very nice. And how convienent that I stumbled upon this poem on halloween! *Creepy...*lol
     
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