About a boy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Oct 22, 2006.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I had a poem in my heart,
    which really is quite an art.
    Too bad it was all but lost.
    Oh! At what a cost!
    It was all about a boy, you see
    about our relationship and me.
    I'm not doing so hot, I hate to say.
    This isn't a place I want to stay.
    I wish I could move on but I can't
    I feel fragile and helpless, like an ant.
    He wants to mess around with other girls
    That thought makes me want to hurl
    I love him so much, but what can I do?
    Leave him and stay feeling blue?
    Or stand by his side while he gets his kicks,
    while he plays his games and his tricks,
    during which time I feel like shit
    I cannot take anymore hits.
    What in the world should I do?
    If you know, please tell me too.
     
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  3. supertramp

    supertramp Member

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    Hippie chick,Hippie chick,
    I feel your pain,
    More than once,
    I felt the same.

    Just remember,
    It's not you,
    But the world,
    Thats so untrue!

    Anyone who tosses,
    a love so true,
    surely Isn't,
    the man for you!

    So smoke a big fatty,
    And must your nerve,
    And KICK THAT BASTARD,
    TO THE CURB!
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    Excellent peom though. I Really like it! I also think your signature is way cool!
     

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