All The Man I am (gdh)

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  1. Icurus

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    "All The Man I Am" - Devon Knight

    Hide away your emotionally lettered heart,
    write from all places insecure,
    forever mindful of lies you show others,
    with out stretched hands,
    my true trust will protect as you fall in to all the man I am.
    Beautiful!, again cannot choose images of absolute,
    it's only hands of trust me're images of chance,
    caught up in that specific light of anticipation,
    an apparition named hope,
    that visits briefly with deep inhalation.
    I can write with out fear, that I may not mislead myself,
    and through lies postpone my birth of truths,
    sanity through my daily fix of fantasy of the most beautiful demise
    that goes on infinitely incomplete,
    so, for all the man I am, is all I can allow......
    Devon Knight ~
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Beuatifully written. I really think you opened yourself up in this poem. I'ld like to read more.

    Peace and love
     
  3. Icurus

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    ("More") Then this one's just for you...........................

    "Soul Sharing"

    A perfect sphere I've found here,
    eye to eye and nose to nose,
    warm safe lips on which I rest,
    ever close and breast to breast,
    pulling gently on lower lip,
    a bowl of passion we share a sip,
    not a sound to be heard,
    just lips soft brushing,
    patient, never rushing,
    warmth of breath and solid devotion,
    passionate trust an unspoke emotion,
    careful attempt not to bruise,
    lips to love, not to use,
    bodies rise again, and again,
    blocking out knowledge of a beauty,
    that'll soon have to end....



    Thank you for your time to read, and kind reply.
    Devon Knight ~
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Another beautiful poem! That is so well written. I really love it's imagery of the two lovers. Too bad my ex can't fit that description (sigh!) It is a great poem, Icurus.

    Peace and love
     
  5. Icurus

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    Most kind of you, if any guy doesn't let you know him!, split!
    and thanks so much for your time to read and reply.
    See, I knew love once in my life thus far, so much more can be said
    with thee eye's then your mouth ever will, don't waste your life with out
    knowing true love, after you do, your writing improves, your view on life
    in gen. Whats "True Love?" you ask, you will know it when nothing else matters
    for you both, and you can never explain it, when you cry just cause their there,
    nothing wrong, just pure joy of being alive at that specific moment, with that
    specific person, hense this poem just pub'd in "Publishers Clearing House" I entitiled it "Heavy Handed Words"......here, its short!


    "Heavy Handed Words"

    "To lift a sound what weight must I endur?,
    if it be square, or round would it lean?,
    if spoke loud enough how far would it carry?,
    but how doe's something without matter travel?,
    maybe it was what was said that mattered most,
    and with the most heart felt words, the more heavier
    the burdon".
    Devon Knight ~

    It was a question to myself, why is it easier
    to tell someone something hurtful, then to say I love you instead?
    Some would think it was a sign of weakness, if this be true to the least
    degree, I'm weak!, I wish love and happyness to you alway's, and I
    find that statement as light as a feather...... ")

    Dev ~
     
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