i dont really know what this is

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RocketQueen21, Oct 9, 2006.

  1. RocketQueen21

    RocketQueen21 Member

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    but i thought id share


    How quick

    So reassured

    So strong and proud

    All faith is lost in my temple now

    Not time not patience has healed my insides

    Not the pressure or the heroes in my realm

    The deceit that has kept me from myself

    Going back to that same pit

    From this place I thought I had taken so much

    I thought it was all burned

    If we all crawled back to safety

    Would it all keep turning?

    Would it all keep going like it has been?

    Like it should

    Has this tree died to save the roots?

    Is my shape in your memory?

    Have I done my job?

    I’m stalled so push me to freedom
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Nice poem. i like it.

    Peace and love
     

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