memories

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 2extreme, Oct 2, 2006.

  1. 2extreme

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    Look through the open winter window,
    cool wind flowing fresh through a million punctures,
    and roam over the barren land, reminiscing
    over old memories.
    Regret, forget,
    regret again,
    for one moment,
    then another,
    as the sky dims into dark melancholy.

    I think about the first days,
    the best days,
    when I was ever so young,
    and fun was all I knew,
    and I wonder if I'll ever feel the same
    again.
    As the night grows darker,
    and the land is no longer visible,
    I think about how the lost day,
    and the night,
    are representative of the present time,
    where daytime memories fade to black,
    and never come back.


    I rest,
    waiting for the next morning.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very beautiful! I love the imagery. I really like it.
     
  3. 2extreme

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    thanks
     
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