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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by papapoet52, Sep 19, 2006.

  1. papapoet52

    papapoet52 Member

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    Alone
    in a room full of people
    Awake
    while the world sleeps
    Asleep
    as the world moves
    Scream
    not saying a word
    silent
    saying to much
    searching
    but never finding
    finding
    all the wrong stuff
    Such is the life
    of a square peg
    looking for a round whole
     
  2. myself

    myself just me

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    Interesting poem - describing a search for meaning and the absurdity of life.
     
  3. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    i think this would sound awesome spoken and putting emphasis on certain words would definitely make it ten times more powerful than when it's just read, but i really like it :)
     
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