Run away mind

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by papapoet52, Sep 17, 2006.

  1. papapoet52

    papapoet52 Member

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    Has anyone seen my runaway mind
    If you have didja peek inside
    didja see mumzy and was she fine
    or thoughts long ago deep and wide
    Didja find loves aboad
    dripping passion or lust
    or get lost on the yellow brick road
    or left inna cloud of dust
    didja stop to get high
    with Hanna ,Doc and the crowd
    didja just pass it by
    the party to loud
    didja find quiet with Kris on the hill
    didja stop to visit with my ol pal Phil
    These and much more
    you will find
    when you look into my run away mind
     
  2. myself

    myself just me

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    Good work! :)
     
  3. Columbo

    Columbo Senior Member

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    Its good how you got that together if your mind ran away ! LOL
    just joking - Its a good poem its kinda melancholy though
    and very reflective on life (not a criticism just an observation)
     
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