A Bug's Life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Sep 6, 2006.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    A Bug's Life

    They really have it made;
    they don't have to worry about work or women
    loneliness, futility or despair.
    They don't worry about anything.

    There is no work for them--
    just walking and eating;
    because the world is their feast
    with more than enough to go around,
    all for free.

    Love may not be love
    but it comes easy.
    There's just male and female
    and sex as a matter of course.
    There's no courtship, no need to impress;
    and even if there is,
    do you think that bug cries at night
    depressed over being rejected?
    The bug who finds no lover
    just goes merrily back to eating.

    They don't have to think about God;
    they don't have to think about anything.
    No stress exists for them
    when it comes to finding their place.
    Their place is to walk, eat, have sex, and die,
    and no bug stays awake at night
    because he's lost his way.

    Their life of brainless instinct
    may seem dull to most--
    moving thoughtless through your days
    devoid of higher and deeper emotion;
    but the bugs have that figured out too.
    They live and die in a day or a week.
    If theirs is a life of misery,
    at least it's over soon.
     
  2. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Wow man, very insightful. Really good prose piece about the simplicity of a bug's life. Just crawlin' and fuckin' and searchin' for food. Yeah, man. :)
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    very good piece

    only one thing bothers me

    "they don't have to worry about work or women" the latter is true but the former, well, lots of bugs need to work, not all, but like ants and termites and other bugs that live in societies and spiders building and repairing webs and such

    i don't mean to be anal about that one thing, because i love the poem
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Thanks. It was the lack of worry i was getting it, not the lack of work. Though I put the lie to that in the second stanza, saying there is no work...hmm. Well, I claim poetic liberty. :)
     
  5. ommanipadmehum

    ommanipadmehum Member

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    you put it so nicely.thank for sharing


    god bless,

    marina
     
  6. TheLizardKingMike

    TheLizardKingMike Members

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    Thats awesome man, you really broke that down nicely. It was very enjoyable. Much love,
    Mike
     

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