sounds of the city

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by teh-horace, Sep 1, 2006.

  1. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    things are-a happenin', again and again
    the sounds of the city, they just seem to come in
    the hustle and bustle, ain't no hustle and flow
    life's at it's quickest when life seems so slow
    you voice your opinion with stickers on cars
    you're told to excel and you hope to go far
    daylight, nighttime, downtown, one love
    friends and foes, a push and a shove
    welcome to wonder, the showtime begins
    as the sounds of the city just seem to come in


    -richie
     
  2. FreeBird1969

    FreeBird1969 Fleas on their paws.

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    Aww, Richie. That was wonderful. :)
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    thanks kryssy-poo :D
     
  4. Gerva

    Gerva Member

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    I like the rhythm
     
  5. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    thank you :)
     
  6. CrucifiedDreams

    CrucifiedDreams Members

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    Woah, I totally dig this. :)
     
  7. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    thank you thank you

    :D
     
  8. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Pretty good man, I dig it
     
  9. myself

    myself just me

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    Realistic and nicely expressed view on life in cities. :)
     
  10. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    thanks :)

    i try i suppose :p
     
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