It's just a perfectionist's memory looking up from the pit, Remembering All the pairs of workboots That lie refused, beaten, and rotten But unused: I remember the pit worked itself, that And the greasy moisture drops that condescended up, inside the colored part of the eyes In pairs of two, two lively beasts they would shift, bend, then smile with the curvature of an ever more distorted image The pit's memory and the round tumbling colors Throw up honesty and homage, covering the underground monument honoring those who Live numb and honest It's a good job for me I construct monuments Fitted with pits and valleys And balance and peace
I'm blown away. I have only one question: why is the narrator a perfectionist? How does that affect the monuments that the narrator creates, and the pit that the narrator digs?
Umm.. this is... whatever you want it to be, as is basically all of my writing. There will be vague, disgusting, and beautiful things to come in the future. But the best I can describe this, is its the Universe, and cycles of being.