Hard Hat/Blue Collar/Scarred Tears/Subterranean Beauty

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by La-Te-Ra-Lus, Aug 31, 2006.

  1. La-Te-Ra-Lus

    La-Te-Ra-Lus Member

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    It's just a
    perfectionist's memory
    looking up from the pit,
    Remembering

    All the pairs of workboots
    That lie refused, beaten, and rotten
    But unused:
    I remember the pit worked itself, that

    And the greasy moisture drops that condescended
    up, inside the colored part of the eyes
    In pairs of two, two lively beasts
    they would shift, bend, then smile
    with the curvature of an ever more distorted image

    The pit's memory and the round tumbling colors
    Throw up honesty and homage, covering the
    underground monument honoring those who
    Live numb and honest

    It's a good job for me
    I construct monuments
    Fitted with pits and valleys
    And balance and peace
     
  2. MollyBloom

    MollyBloom Member

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    I'm blown away. I have only one question: why is the narrator a perfectionist? How does that affect the monuments that the narrator creates, and the pit that the narrator digs?
     
  3. La-Te-Ra-Lus

    La-Te-Ra-Lus Member

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    Umm.. this is... whatever you want it to be, as is basically all of my writing. There will be vague, disgusting, and beautiful things to come in the future. But the best I can describe this, is its the Universe, and cycles of being.
     
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