my rant

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LordHelmet, Aug 17, 2006.

  1. LordHelmet

    LordHelmet Member

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    was sittin in the coffee shop the other day, had a bad case of writers block, so i just started some free thought free flow writing, this is what turned out.


    flashing lights, designer clothes
    newest trends, reality TV
    hot cars hotter girls
    drugs, booze, cigarettes
    where does it end?
    why are we here?
    to waste money
    and kill the planet
    big TV's and stereos
    help escape humanity
    avoid my family at all costs
    the information superhighway
    I'd rather talk to some girl halfway across the world
    than spend time with you babe
    keep me posted with the latest news flash
    shock and awe, misinformation
    propeghanda propped up and blared out loud
    twenty four hour news, terrorism, war everywhere
    where does it end?
    why are we here?
    diets, diet pills, weight loss center
    its immoral to find the cure for cancer
    AIDS killing all of Africa
    Bombs dropping on women and children
    fight war there, keep it from coming here
    droning, flashing, thumping, gyrating girls gone wild
    where does it end?
    why are we here?
    tree hugger, peacenick, bleeding heart
    if you dont want war, then you hate freedom?
    kill them all ask questions later
    more money for bombs, less for books
    crime in the streets, cops off the beat
    where does it end?
    why are we here?
    dissent is disloyal
    stop flag burning
    fear the terrorists
    hate the gays
    love the cross
    what melting pot?
    conformity is good
    diversity is bad
    where does it end?
    why are we here?
    what happened to us?
    the people who took the high road
    even when it was harder - just because it was right
    now wont face our fears at any cost
    point the finger, alongside a gun
    pull it from my cold dead hands
    where does it end?
    why are we here?
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Good rant! I like it.

    Peace and love
     
  3. LordHelmet

    LordHelmet Member

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  4. AerialReaver

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    Awesome rant man, I feel the same way a lot of the time.
     
  5. 06thenewsummeroflove

    06thenewsummeroflove Member

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    i love it. As a matter of fact i think i might pass it off as my own to impress people. I know its morally wrong, but its just that good.
     
  6. LordHelmet

    LordHelmet Member

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    steal this rant
     
  7. LordHelmet

    LordHelmet Member

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    wake up
     
  8. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    sounds like a country song j/k i like it
     
  9. LordHelmet

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    a country song? gotta work on that, I'll get right on the steel guitar...
     
  10. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Hmm, I like this, I like it alot.
     
  11. Olympic-Bullshitter

    Olympic-Bullshitter Banned

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    A poet once said, "Love me, so I will know who I am."
     
  12. LordHelmet

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    and now, thanks to the awe inspiring genius of the internet... I know who I am...
     
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