Treading water Dreading conversations I`m digging myself into a hole here. Exactly where I don`t want to be Just to watch the hand tick by I hate it Everything about this place It seems between the living and the dead. Things between us The non-existence I can`t express it if I tried. Which I won`t. You`d just give me a laundry list of reasons. Straight, I`ll give it to you My love. Which you won`t, "can`t accept" I`m not the one you want You.
Wow, I really like this poem because I can relate to it. My bf and I are having issues and always will and I know what it feels like to be suspended in a sea of uncertainity. Good job! Peace and love
wow very tense i also noticed how your stucture sort of works well with the poem main feelings i got was frustration and longing *don't know whether that was the sort of thing you wanted to convey but either way it was a joy to read.
hi there i also like this poem, it gives all the reasons for change.... sometimes its harder to accept what is needed ,and then again you never know untill you have moved on..... lovenpeace frm saff
