just a feeling of today,for all to read...... what moments rage, inner vains shall bleed, temper only may drip. ive moaned before again...i moan. is life full, so round this earth,we feel. do i not,open this palm. this reach to live.so, love filters upon my cheek. a tear that flows into our seas,the ocean driven by many who now like myself sometimes weep... for sudden peace,not given through pain,but then again i moan ... tender hearts that fail the mind of whispering time... tickles this body,to breathe. to live,the leap i take, for love,the tranquil rapids of love.inner out from depths unknown.. i moaned, and carry on.... lovenpeace from saff just a little feeling words may not give such a feeling enough to explain....the ups and downs of love,life all i feel think see do ...... and all that surrounds me this earth. this tilted way of living in pockets of misunderstandings and war .... while the few shout speak love,and try to explain.....thank you
Good piece! It is hard to write about love and life, because words cannot express the emotion and feeling behind them. You did a great job though! Peace and love
thank you for reading......... a feeling,even true thoughts. whisper here,on my knees i past this moment not knowing,how to .. end this line,to step across. bent to toe,i can but swim the deepness,sadness grows. solid love,to shelter life to crowd around me whole. be gentle world,our ball of life.im slow to catch your winds.of change and light,to knowledge bright. this pain it twists skins. so touch upon our human eye,and grant safepassage , for all and more... for her silver rays will alter more,while you and i wait for that golden dawn... love the new day.. stop. the world is turning... lovenpeace from saff
Another great poem! I've read it over an over and I really like the structure of it. I like your writing style. Peace and love