for all, just a poem...i feel...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Aug 16, 2006.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    just a feeling of today,for all to read......

    what moments rage,
    inner vains shall bleed,
    temper only may drip.
    ive moaned before
    again...i moan.
    is life full, so round
    this earth,we feel.
    do i not,open this palm.
    this reach to live.so,
    love filters upon my cheek.
    a tear that flows
    into our seas,the ocean
    driven by many who now
    like myself sometimes weep...
    for sudden peace,not
    given through pain,but
    then again i moan ...
    tender hearts that fail
    the mind of whispering
    time...
    tickles this body,to breathe.
    to live,the leap i take,
    for love,the tranquil
    rapids of love.inner out
    from depths unknown..
    i moaned, and carry on....

    lovenpeace from saff

    just a little feeling words may
    not give such a feeling enough
    to explain....the ups and downs
    of love,life all i feel think see do ......
    and all that surrounds me this earth.
    this tilted way of living in pockets
    of misunderstandings and war ....
    while the few shout speak love,and try to
    explain.....thank you
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Good piece! It is hard to write about love and life, because words cannot express the emotion and feeling behind them. You did a great job though!

    Peace and love
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    thank you for reading.........

    a feeling,even true thoughts.

    whisper here,on my knees
    i past this moment not
    knowing,how to ..
    end this line,to step across.
    bent to toe,i can but swim
    the deepness,sadness grows.
    solid love,to shelter life
    to crowd around me whole.
    be gentle world,our ball
    of life.im slow to catch
    your winds.of change and
    light,to knowledge bright.
    this pain it twists skins.
    so touch upon our human
    eye,and grant safepassage ,
    for all and more...
    for her silver rays
    will alter more,while
    you and i wait for
    that golden dawn...
    love the new day..

    stop. the world is turning...

    lovenpeace from saff
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Another great poem! I've read it over an over and I really like the structure of it. I like your writing style.

    Peace and love
     
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