"midnight train"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sleep_city, Aug 14, 2006.

  1. sleep_city

    sleep_city Member

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    midnight and blue city light
    the skies always seemed brighter out west
    as dusk falls down all across town
    loneliness comes on like a fever
    till my friends come by and we drink under the sky
    cause were taking the train tonight
    to the west where the sunset burns bright
     
  2. myself

    myself just me

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    I liked your poem - well done! :)
     
  3. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Good short poem! Concise and to the point.

    Peace and love
     
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