Don`t do that I hate when you do When you cock your head at that 45 degree angle Away from me. I swear it`s not true You know how girls like to whisper Three hundred and sixty degrees of lies. At least be straight with me Don`t box me out Listen to me, please! This pain is acute Longer and longer segments between seeing you. Conversations, random tangents. In a moment, 180 degrees of change and seperation
I read the title and something told me this was going to be an interesting poem and I was right! I loved how you used geometry as a vehicle to describe emotions and reactions. Well done!
I wasn't expecting that poem from the title, but I really like it! I can defienently relate to what your poem expressed. I like the use of geometry in it. Very creative!
fantastic! i once read a John Agard book on poems all with relation to maths for some reason i think using this technique is pretty cool
Wow I'm very very impressed. [You know how girls like to whisper Three hundred and sixty degrees of lies.] This made me smile. It's so true and the way you put it is very unique. Thanks for that! Once again your ending is superb.
