peace i believe

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Aug 7, 2006.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    to all something today rode with peace..........


    solitude,is done,the hermit
    awakes .is this freedom...
    how long ive wondered,
    barefoot alone .
    the feeling tranquil ,
    yet i live not on my own...

    shadows follow,only the truth
    not opened hearts, if mind,
    once and always the fool.
    tilted moments,cards
    unknown,to who...

    inner eye,creeps to see
    the tower of living,breaking
    falling not failing.ME.
    rebuild in time,if allowed
    for truth is whole ,not
    hidden now...

    solitude,rides upon belief
    to be at peace so willingly.
    yet i bend and fold,
    torn by sight,what
    hell did create,this
    war this human fight...


    thank you lovenpeace from saff

    one moment its here in hand
    then the next it flies and fades
    if allowed to forget our moments
    of each day.....
     
  2. OneUndone

    OneUndone Member

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    Great poem, Saff. Brings to mind a lot of conflicts, both internal and external. Good to see you're still posting here. Peace and love...
     
  3. Arkady

    Arkady Member

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    Like the last stanza, really flows nicely.
     
  4. rg paddler

    rg paddler Senior Member

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    It's a rare thing - but make it a part of you instead of it fading
     
  5. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    thank you all for these words you eply with

    yes torn like life like nature,
    always awake and yet in dreams
    this moment of love,should be forever.
    so i write i hold pen or keys.........


    lovenpeace from saff

    be whole,it helps.....
     
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