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Ambulance

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pagansrule!, Aug 12, 2006.

  1. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    I might add more to this piece later, but this is the poem as of now

    Ambulance


    It screamed down the blurring column of traffic,

    Leaving a trail of tattered decibels behind.

    Pulling around the bend, it commands respect,

    Its’ capsized banner a proclamation of urgency.

    The scene is stained with lost destiny and mangled dreams.

    But nothing will faze the sterile savior,

    It is intimate with pain.

    A mechanized Valkyrie, it ferries a different type of warrior.

    The mundane warrior, who floats to a sedated paradise.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I like your use of imagery in this poem, the image of the warrior. I'ld like to hear more!

    Peace and love
     
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