alternet paradise

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by floyd4peace, Aug 6, 2006.

  1. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    a dead man falls
    from the outer land
    its existence diminishing
    right when all
    was close at hand

    the surreal landscape
    that had closed his heart
    had opened his eyes
    to freedom and art

    the vast wasteland
    that nhow lay before him
    was to be his home
    for many a millenium

    no longer were there people
    with whom to deal with
    an artists paradise
    now lay within arms reach

    so here was his freedom
    to some a hell
    but to an introverted artist
    it's as a rose smells
    sweet
     
  2. AcousticPeace

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    i like this one. very good. simple, but really explains the passion an artist can have.
     
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