a very anti war poem.

Discussion in 'Old Hippies' started by unionpacificrailroad, Aug 11, 2004.

  1. unionpacificrailroad

    unionpacificrailroad Member

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    Peace everyone,

    i wrote it while doing my american histroy report. i got eh 60's. this was in the viet nam war section. with that picture of that 8 year old girl running down the street burned in napalm :( this poem is made from that picture.

    children runing down the street
    bullets flying from thee head to there feet

    the soldiers won
    but there heart was done

    the soldiers wept as teh general said well done.

    as they looked to the dead children
    then to there gun.................

    the end.

    please tell me what you thought of it.

    later

    teh mind numb flower child
     
  2. homebudz

    homebudz Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Short,simple,and to the point.For what it's worth Josh,well done.Peace
     
  3. unionpacificrailroad

    unionpacificrailroad Member

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    Peace homebudz,​
    thank you very much. i lways looking for encouragment! i missed you man. it has been a while. how are you?​
    later​
    teh very tired flower child​
     
  4. homebudz

    homebudz Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Good morning little bro,

    I've been doing my usual thing,fixin bikes and building them.We recently took two of our bikes to a local show and came home with 3 trophies.Another bike we built earlier in the year took first place in the Pro-Street Div. at the Iron Horse.All in all,we're hanging tough.How have things been going for you Josh?I don't see much of you on here anymore.I hope all is well.Do you have your chevy running yet?Peace bro.
     
  5. unionpacificrailroad

    unionpacificrailroad Member

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    Peace homebudz,

    well that new law that says 17 d under cant get on public computers put my with no connection sept for mail and i didnt have your adress. but my computer is fixed ( for now anyway! ) my chevy. i am still getting her paid off first. they say all it needs is carb work. ( 4 barrel ) so there goes money for gas! but also rubber :p she really doesnt need alot of work for a unrestored 57! she has alot of potental and i want to share it! my dad and friend would love to work on her! and i could use the labor for no pay thing :p i only have 1 part time job. i am trying to get a second job so i can work every of the week and get more money to get her factory shape agian and really have eyes look my way! i have a ffriend of my moms a hipster too making me a hemp keycahin! with one of my peace necklaces! my car has about 8 keys on teh small chain its on now! every key is different but a copy of every one. 2 for the ignition, 2 for door locks, 2 for gas tank cover, and 2 for trunk! she is a VERY solid 57 specially for being a Nerbaska car all her life! the worst case senario is the block is cracked and i can get a new long block ( the entire motor about ) for $1,000! cheeap eh? brand new to! cant way to se the gas get pumped into her tank and dump a bottle of lead additive in there and hit it in overdrive and then the real term of petal to the metal and tehre will be my signature for that gas station- and its perminant :p

    later

    the tired flower child

    p.s. i will be on alot more more often. feel free to pm me if you like.
     
  6. ~Sam~

    ~Sam~ Cosmic Traveler

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    Goodness! But your grease monkey work takes me back. Way, way back, Freight Train.

    I like your poem. Short, like Budz said, and to the point.
     
  7. unionpacificrailroad

    unionpacificrailroad Member

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    PEace Sam,

    i am glad you like it. you should cherish all those memories both good and bad beause now they are history. and you are in teh history books :) at least in one picture one place one time!

    Sam how have you been doing? i missed talking to you.

    later

    the mind confused flower child
     
  8. mosaicthreads

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    Well said! Keep writing!


    peace to ya,
    ~mosaic
     
  9. unionpacificrailroad

    unionpacificrailroad Member

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    Peace,

    thank you mam. i have another poem in the poem forum!

    later

    the tired flwoer child
     
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