Where Are You?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by deep_blue_death03, Jul 31, 2006.

  1. deep_blue_death03

    deep_blue_death03 Member

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    I wait for you, even when I know you are not coming

    As if I were on a paraniod drug, I watch the window

    I have never been on this side of the window

    I have never been so vulnerable

    Still I do try to close the blinds

    Though my mind is always watching, always waiting

    Always hoping your beautiful face will appear

    Where are you?
     
  2. myself

    myself just me

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    The poem captures very nicely this feeling of expectation, hope, lack of patience, uncertainty... It's all about the irrationality of love.
     
  3. gypsychildblues8

    gypsychildblues8 Member

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    thank you for that beautiful poem.
    I feel like,in this moment, you have expressed what I am feeling..what I could not express..
     
  4. ramadecer

    ramadecer Member

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    It makes me happy the way you express this kind of feeling...I guess it`s like when you cry cuz you`re way to happy... You know you`re weaker than you should be but all you want is to enjoy those moments... Maybe waiting in vain is not always useless...
     

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