I won’t

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by myself, Jul 29, 2006.

  1. myself

    myself just me

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    I won’t blame God for this

    but

    I’d rip the sky apart

    To see your face

    and

    I’d join you anytime

    In death


    I won’t shout away my pain
    Walking in the stormy rain
     
    myself, Jul 29, 2006
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  3. bird_migration

    bird_migration ~

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    How to deal with the past that haunts the present and will haunt the future?
    A death is like a ghost, in a way, the undecided thin line between love and hate, pain and bliss. Not knowing what will be.

    You pain screams from of this poem and hits us, the reader, where it hits best; in our present.

    Well done~!
     
    bird_migration, Jul 29, 2006
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  5. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    beautiful :)
     
    indian~summer, Jul 29, 2006
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  7. deep_blue_death03

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    I love the visual art this paints in my mind.
     
    deep_blue_death03, Jul 31, 2006
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