Get me a beer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rydns, Jul 28, 2006.

  1. rydns

    rydns Member

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    Arent you just precious. smirking asshole of a man, breath like a brewery and no shirt. the ever goin debates... Bud or milawakee, ford or dodge, dumb or dumber. Fuck it. your walking proof that the buttfuck method of birth control has failed.

    your all the same here. white trash every last one. if its a trailer a mansion or an apartment. just rednecks and retards sedating yourselves like clockwork. as you drool out a convorsation you punch the card, sip the beer, pluck the banjo and drop out.

    PARTY BY THE RIVER! FREE BEER! FREE LOVE! AND FREE BIRD! im there! hop in the pickup leave the kids they'll be doing the same thing when there our age. huntin, muddin and fishin BAH! im sick of you, of everything.

    -more of a monolouge
    -Rydns
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I don't know how to take this: glorification of the redneck way of life, or condemnation. Maybe just resignation?

    Anyways, you have a way with words, crude but clear.
     
  3. FreeBird1969

    FreeBird1969 Fleas on their paws.

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    I think it's a condemnation...but it's kind of like, hey, it's just the way things go, the circle of life.

    Ehh, that's how I took it.
     
  4. Runnin' Blue

    Runnin' Blue Member

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    now aren't you a little DWEEB you're not hip by any........oh why should I even try.....you're childish......you DWEEB........you should understand that
     
  5. rydns

    rydns Member

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    sorry you didnt like it.





















    Dweeb
     
  6. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    i quite liked it -- thanks much for sharing, Rydns.

    "..walking proof that the buttfuck method of birth control has failed."

    priceless.
     
  7. Lainey

    Lainey Member

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    i totally agree :)

     
  8. AerialReaver

    AerialReaver Member

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    lol thats beautiful man.....
     
  9. rydns

    rydns Member

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    thanx everyone if you like that one tell me waht you think of my other two

    Welcome the dirty world of eternal happiness

    and

    catfood for the soul

    they should be right next to eachother in the peotry section.

    -thanx
    -rydns
     
  10. AcousticPeace

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    i enjoyed this. the feeling behind it seemed angry but sort of sarcastic. i dont know. it just felt good.
     

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