Your hugs show me that you never wanna let me go That's all I really need to know But your kiss is so much like true love You are my angel from above I wish this day would always stay So my whole world won't turn gray I will love you forever And you can't say never Our love is like a piece of art Because you will always remain in my heart.
Well, I like it. It's sweet, sounds sincere, and mostly reads well. The only bad part was "and you can't say never" since it doesn't really need to be there except as a rhyme. But it doesn't say anything meaningful.