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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RickityRock, Jul 28, 2006.

  1. RickityRock

    RickityRock Member

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    Your hugs show me that you never wanna let me go
    That's all I really need to know
    But your kiss is so much like true love
    You are my angel from above

    I wish this day would always stay
    So my whole world won't turn gray
    I will love you forever
    And you can't say never
    Our love is like a piece of art
    Because you will always remain in my heart.
     
  2. RickityRock

    RickityRock Member

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    yeah its pretty gay but whatever........
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Well, I like it. It's sweet, sounds sincere, and mostly reads well. The only bad part was "and you can't say never" since it doesn't really need to be there except as a rhyme. But it doesn't say anything meaningful.
     

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