Mystery

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LivinNreflection, Aug 11, 2004.

  1. LivinNreflection

    LivinNreflection Member

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    Lonely, disgusted, dazed, and confused.
    Sad, but so close, can't reach, almost there. So far.
    Happy, relaxed, good. Here with me, holding on.
    Excited, leaving, dark, and romantic.
    Lay down. You and I.
    Lonely, disgusted, dazed, and confused.
    You're gone.
    Mystery, don't know why, think.
    Still not here.
    Weird, gloomy, depressed.
    Never came back.
    Mourn, black, quite, tear.
    Suicide and don't know why.
    Come back.
    Sad, wondering, baffeld.
    You died, and don't know why.




    this is one of my poems that I really don't know what I was thinking when I wrote it. I like it though.
     
  2. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    wow dude, i really really like this. i usually don't like poems of this nature....but this one is fantastic. it makes me so 'aw :( '
     

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