As a Question

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Jul 20, 2006.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    My own mind is what
    keeps me from sleep

    Her lovely smile is
    what keeps me alive

    Oh, alive.

    A living monument
    to our time

    A new light giving
    birth to our ideas.

    Oh, prayers.

    Couldn't you see the
    prairie fire sky?

    I never meant to
    ask you that, though.

    As a question.
     
  2. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    oh man, this strikes me as wonderful. I'm going to read it a few mor times to soak it up, but I truly dig it.
     
  4. Biida

    Biida Member

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    Well said, my brother of sorts. I feel the question hitting home.
     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Wow, thanks guys!I didn't think I'd earn such warm responses, to this piece. :)

    BTM, I gotta thank you big time, man. You leave the grooviest of comments, and I can feel that you really dig what I'm saying, and you know where I'm coming from. Glad to see you pickin' up the vibes. :D
     
  6. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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  7. Apples+Oranjes

    Apples+Oranjes Bekkasaur

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    Aw I really like this one... it's comforting.

    Beautiful James... always different, too. Love it.

    And I miss you, p.s.
     

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