The Love Song For No One

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SvgGrdnBeauty, Jul 14, 2006.

  1. SvgGrdnBeauty

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    I kind of spouted this out...don't know if its anything good or anything...just sharing...comment if you wish...
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    Sing me a love song
    Whisper in my ear
    Show me that all I've longed for
    Still exists

    When I'm confused
    Hold me close
    Light up life with the sweet smell of your clothes
    Thus is the lonely love song
    Of one who weeps
    Dreaming of someone to hold her close when she's asleep

    Sing me a requiem
    The sweetest of dreams
    Of a love so strong that the song itself would weep
    And I'll reciprocate

    Open arms are a welcome friend
    To one who loves to be held
    Cradled and nuzzled
    As a ginger kitten looking for a home

    Open eyes of a disappointed dream
    Waiting for life to start
    To spread a love
    Manifest within
    That knows not its own power

    Thus concludes the sweet sitar raga
    Of this love song for no one
    That floats through the air
    Finding its place amongst the pure love that exists everywhere
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

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    very true words.

    great last line.......yet i feel this...

    but dont forget your love..
    the one you may love...
    this is human ,a feeling
    your words show how you
    see the love all around
    yet it reaches for personal love.
    a partner..
    i loved this piece because it opens
    up alittle of your human needs.

    lovenpeace from saff
     
  3. SvgGrdnBeauty

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    thank you saff for your kind review...
     
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