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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by daysye, Jul 10, 2006.

  1. daysye

    daysye dumb as a box of hammers

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    when i awoke with tears
    i wandered outside and
    all i could feel was the rain
    the cold air did not bother me
    i had lost someone that could
    never be replaced there were
    tears running down my face
    blurring my vision so i could not see

    i was thankful she was not suffering
    but that did not mean i was not
    i had lost someone so dear to me
    she was my clown when i was sad
    my best friend when i wanted to talk
    and my shoulder when i needed one to lean on

    she was my second mother
    who disciplined me when i was bad
    praised me when i was good
    and encouraged me to work towards my goals
    i lost the only person that ever understood me
    i lost my grandmother.
     
  2. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    so sorry for your lose; but this was certainly a really genuine piece of work to come sundering from such hurt and lose.

    best of luck and thanks for sharing :)

    take care
     
  3. crypticnight

    crypticnight Member

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    Very Sad[​IMG] But a poem of great beauty has sprung from the ashes of your tradgedy. My condolensces and may you find joy upon your path soon. [​IMG]
     

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