Ive.been.here.before. Aside.the.garden,atop.the.moon Gleaming.flowers,and.a.solid.tune But,for.it.to.be.mustnt.it.be.not? Oh!dreary.ponderings.on.a.summers.noon I.kicked.alot.when.I.fought that.knight.This.night, I.left.him.screaming,unconcious.dreaming Laying.in.a.grass.field.stark.naked.bleeding Only.to.wake.up.revealing... a.butterfly. From.the.forest,It.came.so.soon A.butterfly.upon.the.moon.
Meah...you're trying too hard for the 'look at my unique style' gig. Some might dig it and find it invigorating but I find it annoying and distracting from the poem. A forgetable piece. Was this a stylistic satire?
