Tanabata serenade

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Jul 5, 2006.

  1. Bhaskar

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    Droplets of Tokyo
    glisten breathlessly
    on your skin
    like Orihime in exile.

    They warn me in languages
    I could never understand.
     
    Bhaskar, Jul 5, 2006
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  3. stalk

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    I like it,
    and I think you could.
     
    stalk, Jul 6, 2006
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  5. Bhaskar

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    I never understand warnings.
     
    Bhaskar, Jul 7, 2006
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  7. MollyBloom

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    Ohhh I love this. Sends shivers down my spine!
     
    MollyBloom, Jul 7, 2006
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  9. crypticnight

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    very good. Such power in so few words.
     
    crypticnight, Jul 8, 2006
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