Trust me, said again as if it we're the first time, sonnets, and poems to draw you into my spell and fall in line, words spoke so hard you could take to the grave, a religion in themself's that they've made you feel a need to be saved, but you find you we're as the court jester at most, a fool made of you, your heart a play thing for your benevolent(sp?) host... Devon Knight ~ Icurus
I like it a lot, great ideas expressed here man. Only problem is your spelling: sonnets has two "n"s "we're" is a contraction for "we are", I think you're looking for "were" benevolent is how that one's spelled and it should be "words spoken so hard" Besides those little quibbles, this is a really good piece, especially considering it's shortness. You really said a lot in a very thoughtful way in a very small space.
