The Spider on My Ceiling (Based on a true story)

The spider on my ceiling
Is weaving herself a web
She doesn't use a loom
She's never heard of thread
My fear is worth concealing
To watch the widow dance
Her sticky tapestry of white
Transparent at first glance
She takes a bungi jumper dive
It ceases in mid air
And reels herself back to the top
With quaint arachnid flare
Her meal arrives
He's still alive
He struggles and resists
To no avail he starts to bribe
But the spider's teeth insist

 

Thats cool I like spiders.. good imagery for sure.. i like the end part gets intense lol

 

i wrote a poem about a spider on ym ceiling once. i twas sweet.your's is too peace

 

awww i love it!!! that spider sounds so sweet. although im terrified of spiders, i rather like the sound of this one!

 

This spider is just fascinating. I mean, she's FAST! I watch her all the time, but with fear nontheless, because she's rather big and colorful.

 

Thats awesome man....

 

I also once wrote a poem about a spider on my ceiling...completely different. anyways, I liked yours, the end was good "the spiders teeth insist" well worded