exerpt from a thought on LSD

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stalk, May 5, 2006.

  1. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    sucked into the rift-raft of drone strings leaking into our lightless void
    my eyes, well the molecular structure that constitutes the eyes
    naturally, we devolved well into my pockets regulating with the beginning sunshine that unveils, unlocks!
    that lacerates, unfolds and unfastens
    bursts, jimmy, pops and penetrates.
    the muktuk seeps through bark
    and releases the flying ear that hears the sitar structure of spectral groans.
     
  2. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    this is basically exactly what I was thinking
    during one moment when I was riding along thru space
    on LSD in my Closet, it was dark
    but the stars, and my posters were all dancing,
    Naked humans dancing out of the walls!
    Walls,
    groaaaaning,
    It was so amazing.
    We called it the void, ahhhh!

    I'm sure you all feel
     
  3. stalk

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    None of you feel the dancing walls?
     
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    the MUKTUK seeps through bark
    and RELEASES the flying EAR
    that HEARS
    the sitar structure
    of spectral GROANS.

    that's how weird acid is . .
     
  5. floyd4peace

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    sounded sweet to me. when you said jimmy, was that about jimmy page? yeah...well i liked the word choice a hell of a lot. awesome.
     
  6. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    i liked it
    sounded pretty awesome man
     
  7. stalk

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    nahhh Jimmy is a weird word-
    Tho I do admire led zep,
    for sure.
     
  8. AlfredNewman

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    nice- gotta love the acid, it makes a creative internal structure such as yours much more interestinggally concerned to brains such as thee
     
  9. stalk

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    thanks mate :[ ]
     
  10. DevilSaNgel

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    wow, not a lot of poems are written the way you do!
     
  11. stalk

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    Hover with me, girl
     
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    shead the mornings obsloite freedom within born upon the winds thrown from the stars a preatcher of war im told possesion of our elabret fears comes from within the wilderness we clame to be free we proclame to be lost within the ship of dreams harbouring into insainty lsd set us free there soul s are keept within there pockets so they can feel the universe function the universe is evolving around us as we slip into the capsided dreams that perfect the nights ballence just something i wrote a few nights ago just wondered if anyone could get what i was on about in this poem so give me your comments dudes
     

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