written for you~

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by indian~summer, May 29, 2006.

  1. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    slip into a drug induced coma
    isn't that what you've wanted?
    isn't that what you've been dying for,
    on the inside all these years?
    searching the world for anwers
    no one has
    ------
    just sit back
    relax
    i am here
    to take you away
    from this hell
    you've been living in
    you've been dying in
    searching all these years
    but noone has the anwsers
    that you're looking for
    so just sit back
    and relax
    as i tie this scarf around your eyes
    no one can hurt you if you can't see
    like the emus that burry their heads in the sand
    bind to everyone around
    blind to everything
    except me
     
  2. Lather

    Lather Member

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    That's a beautiful poem, it's something every single one of us can relate to.. and did I mention very intense! Love the choice of words.. especially in the last five lines. You have a gift :D
     
  3. hawkMuffin

    hawkMuffin Member

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    :rolleyes: right on man
     
  4. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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