If A Tree Didn't Fall

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pagansrule!, May 20, 2006.

  1. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    If the song of birds had not ceased,

    And their peaceful home were still standing,

    Who would make a sound?



    If the graceful spider had not been murdered,

    And its’ aerial fabric still stretched against the breeze,

    Who would care?



    If the pine trees had not succumb to an arboreal holocaust,

    And were ground to dust

    Who would notice?



    The Solipsists’ inquiry, morns the extinguished soul of nature

    If we listened to the forest,

    Then no tree would have to fall.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    A fine rebuttal you make at the end to the distressful beginning statements. Though, then again, death is a fact of life, so can it be entierly wrong to find some good in what would otherwise seem singularly tragic?
     
  3. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    Idealistically cool.

    :)
     
  4. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

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    wonderfully powerful ending. i enjoyed this... tank you very much for sharing it. :)
     
  5. Aurora of Oceania

    Aurora of Oceania Member

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    This was a very thought-provoking poem. Well done! So often others ignore the cries of the sublime wildernesses; sometimes nature is destroyed for man's greedy profit, and such sweet and meditative places are overexploited horribly. I'm a sincere supporter environmental conservation, and have always loved Keats and Shelley's poems about beautiful songbirds as well. Peace!


    "If we listened to the forest

    Then no tree would have to fall." *The ending is really good.
     
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