Eskimo Kisses

eskimo kisses

Quiet words, whispered emotions,
Soft tongues surrounded in hot chocolate,
Rosy cheeks, from brisk snowy air,
Fire, melting frost from fingers,
While we melt each other.

Fire murmurs crick and cackle,
Alarming eyes, complexion fair,
Four corners lit by dancing light,
Pause, to fill my lungs with air.

Teeter-totter, tumble and fall,
Hot chocolate spilling everywhere,
Hershey himself should see us now,
Lapping chocolate without a care.

Inhaling deeply a dreamer's soul,
Lovely chocolate, and lovely potions,
Tender, soft, and needful lips,
Quiet words, whispered emotions.

 

Yummy!..chocolate games, most delicious! I felt warm all over.

 

your poetry is lovly it really puts u there imagine the place your righting about its much better than any t.v. could ever top. i could read your poems for hours at a time after you post like ten put them all to gether in one post so we can enjoy them all one after another. never stop writing u have a true talent.
peace and love

 

It really was sweet. I loved the rhyme scheme. It fit perfect. Great job.

 

Sweet poem. I felt as though I had just gulped down a mug of hot chocolate after reading it

 

Thanks for the feedback guys!...it's always nice to get someone else's opinion...good or back its appreciated

 

it's cute

i like the title the most. :&